I like your poem Dylan, the start and the ending are the same. Great job Dylan and keep up the good work!
Awesome dylan A great piece of writing and awesome verbs
I can picture the lion. Great writing. Mum
WOW! great poem I may read it again! Keep up the great work Dylan.
great describing words Dylan, it's allot of thinking there.Well done. :-) :)
Good poem Dylan.I hope you had great fun writingit. Awesome-Tori