LION
still waiting for its predator
camouflaging its body in the grass
camouflaging its body in the grass
eyes mysteriously looking at
its sharp teeth coming to pounce on its prey
sucking down the blood for the prey
Dylan Harmer
I like your poem Dylan, the start and the ending are the same. Great job Dylan and keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteAwesome dylan
ReplyDeleteA great piece of writing and awesome verbs
I can picture the lion. Great writing. Mum
ReplyDeleteWOW! great poem I may read it again! Keep up the great work Dylan.
ReplyDeletegreat describing words Dylan, it's allot of thinking there.
ReplyDeleteWell done. :-) :)
Good poem Dylan.
ReplyDeleteI hope you had great fun writing
it. Awesome-Tori