Wednesday 10 April 2013

My poem


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LION

still waiting for its predator  
camouflaging its body in the grass
eyes mysteriously looking at
its sharp teeth coming to pounce on its prey
sucking down the blood for the prey
lion

Dylan Harmer

6 comments:

  1. I like your poem Dylan, the start and the ending are the same. Great job Dylan and keep up the good work!

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  2. Awesome dylan
    A great piece of writing and awesome verbs

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  3. I can picture the lion. Great writing. Mum

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  4. WOW! great poem I may read it again! Keep up the great work Dylan.

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  5. great describing words Dylan, it's allot of thinking there.
    Well done. :-) :)

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  6. Good poem Dylan.
    I hope you had great fun writing
    it. Awesome-Tori

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